Good Girl Pt. 02

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If he's loved her since before Lauren. Since before he had his heartbroken.

Their bodies become mush and their feelings turn into each other. Sam's bare chest rubs onto Dan's shirt. He removes it and holds her tightly. He is enjoying the sensation of her. The feeling that accompanies closeness.

He kisses her bare chest and her moans escape through her mouth. Her eyes are closed and whether it is the alcohol or the moment it is hard to tell. Neither of them want to stop even if they both know what they're doing is wrong.

Dan grabs Sam's supple ass and lifts her off the couch. Her back lands on a wall and the two continue kissing. Her legs wrapped tightly around him.

"Keep kissing me! Don't stop—I need this." Sam yelled.

"I won't."

His kisses continue to be placed on her chest and tits. His tongue exploring her nipples. Her hands grabbing his hair and admiring the view of him.

The two continue their way down the hall. Sam's back slamming into various walls and knocking over various frames. One falls and shatters.

Dan throws Sam back onto the bed. She throws her pants off of herself and all that remains are her beautiful silk panties.

Dan's mouth is watering at the sight of her nude body. It is like Allanah's in so many ways. They have similar breast sizes and their pussies look just as tasty.

He licks his lips and descends on Sam. Removing her panties and taking time to take her smell in.

"Do you want me to taste you?" Dan asked.

"Please!"

Dan's index finger started by gently playing with Sam's clit. Rubbing it up and down as his tongue explored the opening of her pussy. She threw her head back enjoying the moment. Trying not to think about how wrong all this was.

Dan ate her like a hungry lion cub. Grabbing at her body and holding her as close to him as he possibly could. In a sense he was trying to claim her as his property for as long as he could.

There was a knowledge that as her orgasm rolled around an old reality would set in, but for the time being he could deny it. He could insert himself into her life—insert himself into her pussy—and it would have meaning.

"That feels so good Dan!" Her hands pulled his head further into her pussy. He couldn't help but smile.

He leaned forward and kissed his way up her body.

"Sam, you are the most beautiful woman in the world."

"Do you mean it?"

Dan leaned his body weight on top of her. Pushing his groin into Sam as he said it, "I mean it."

"Or do you just want to fuck a vulnerable woman?"

"Can't it be both?"

She grabbed his face and kissed him.

"Get those fucking pants off and fuck me."

He kissed her once more and prepared to enter her body.

"Are you sure?"

Sam reached her hands out and grabbed his ass.

"I'm certain."

She pulled him into her and her pussy surrounded his cock.

The years of lonely tension started to fade as their bodies melded further. As the pleasure of sex moved into both of them.

Dan found himself looking deeply into the eyes of his neighbors wife and loving every second of it. Their eye contact would only be broken by the occasional kiss. During which Dan stopped thrusting and enjoyed her body heat. Enjoyed the moment.

For the first time in years Dan didn't feel so alone.

"Fuck me harder."

Dan obeyed. Sliding in and out of her as fast as possible. Taking time to ensure that her pleasure was being maximized.

"Does Jeffrey fuck you like this?"

"—No—!" She yelled through bated breaths. "—Fuck—!"

Sam's legs wrapped around Dan and locked into place. Her body trembled and she hugged him close and dug her nails into his back.

Her orgasm cleared her body and she stared detachedly towards the ceiling.

"Fuck—That was good."

Dan remained hard inside of her. Waiting for a sign.

"Keep fucking me."

His movements remained consistent and steady. Her responses were negligible. All she did was run her hands along his body. Watching him fuck her.

When it came time Dan marked the married woman's stomach with his cum.

The two of them remained cuddled in bed for the next several hours.

"Don't tell Jeffrey."

"Don't tell Allanah."

"Deal."

Sam had left Dan the night before. In the morning time Dan awoke to a number of missed messages and calls from Allanah. He dismissed the notifications and went about getting ready.

The night before had been unexpected. A total anomaly that he could never have predicted. He lived in the moment where he had to live with the consequences.

He picked up the phone and called Allanah.

"Sorry I didn't answer."

"What happened?"

"Your mom was feeling bad so we talked."

"The whole night? She didn't get home until 2am."

"The whole night."

"What did you talk about? Is it my dad?"

"Yes. It's your dad."

"Is it about his drinking?"

"Allanah, It was a lot of things."

"Look, somebody just rang my doorbell, I gotta go."

"Okay."

"Talk soon."

Dan walked downstairs and threw on a shirt. He threw the door open and

"Dan!"

"Lauren?"

*****

Afterword: First things first, thank you so much for reading. If you enjoyed it or have criticisms please leave a a rating and a comment. Both of which help me grow and learn.

This story is several months old now. I had abandoned it as I feared I couldn't follow up the modest success of the previous.

Here are my own personal criticisms: The writing style is still too telling and not enough doing. In some way that makes it a simpler story but often that isn't to the liking of people. I hope you can give me feedback on that. I feel that I may have forced Nancy with Jeff and Sam with Dan. Opinions on that would be appreciated as well.

Do you prefer longer builds?

Anyway, thank you for your time.


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LegallySaneLegallySaneover 3 years ago
I see

one more chapter but not any more. Laura is history, Sam divorces Jeff. Sam and Allanah move in with Dan and fuck his brains out. Jeff gets Nancy pregnant.

DigitalCrossDigitalCrossover 3 years agoAuthor

I am truly floored, and blessed, by the positive response here. The anonymous who suggested three more chapters, you were spot on. I'm currently working on drafting Part 5. Jedd, I have taken your character matchings into consideration, while there are no certainties I would like to include them into the story (If you dropped a way to contact you I may have personally sent you the unposted scene).

That aside,

I am currently searching for beta readers. If that is of interest, please send me a message. You would get first look into my chapters and help me to dictate the story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
keep going

I have read both parts together. The story is good, interesting and entertaining. The end of each part cries for a sequel. Looking forward to part three. So many questions need an answer.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
It's a modern fantasy!

I have read both chapters in succession and am wondering how you'll get out of the corner into which you've painted yourself. One thing for sure, there is pain on the horizon. So much lust and broken trust cannot be resolved easily.

I suggest you step back and look at the whole picture. I think the marriage was broken a while ago. I think Sam isn't going to go back to Jeffrey so where will she land? Will the girls reconcile? They're in very similar circumstances. What about the girlfriend? She's already broken Dan's heart.

Whatever you do, it's your story and your characters. You decide. But don't take the easy way out. You need at least three more chapters.

Keep it up!

R.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Nancy and Jeff seemed way too rushed. It took a while to break Dan and Jeff seemingly breaks down in 1 conversation? Other than that, all looks good

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