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by HiddenDevil_

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Dawg_E_StileDawg_E_Stileover 15 years ago
Great story!

Wow!! Great story. Great writing! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Feral_IntelligenceFeral_Intelligenceover 15 years ago
A good story for getting off quick

An absolutely wonderful story. I though you used excelent, vivid discriptions. You could really make it seem like I was there watching this girl fuck herself with that dildo.

The one problem that I had with it was that you ignored her hymen. If she was a virgin it should be intact unless she had had something happen to it. I know that it can be annoying thing to deal with, but you should not pretend it does not exist.

NilthNilthalmost 13 years ago

Good writing and good start! :)

Tinge2Tinge2about 11 years ago
A True Writer !

Three paragrahps into this story it was obvious that you have have writing talent. Develope it.

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