by HiddenDevil_
Three paragrahps into this story it was obvious that you have have writing talent. Develope it.
An absolutely wonderful story. I though you used excelent, vivid discriptions. You could really make it seem like I was there watching this girl fuck herself with that dildo.
The one problem that I had with it was that you ignored her hymen. If she was a virgin it should be intact unless she had had something happen to it. I know that it can be annoying thing to deal with, but you should not pretend it does not exist.
Wow!! Great story. Great writing! Can't wait for the next chapter!