All Comments on 'Good God Almighty!'

This needs a sequel. Nice work!

A couple of things: Towards the end, that should be "is" landing tomorrow. The description should be "daughter", singular. And, this was *hot* and needs a sequel!

There's some really weird over political shit in this one. And man has your writing gone down hill. You don't really build up to the moment or develop the characters anymore. It's just 2-dimensional archetypes meeting and then bam, they're fucking. Hopefully you get over this hurdle eventually.

He needed a LOT more revenge on Mary the slut and her family. One night with her sister doesn't come close.

Needs at least another chapter