All Comments on 'Good Little Girl, Big Bad Cop'

Wooooooooowwwwww. Bang on target. This is fire. Loved it. Lived the possessive obsessive part of the abuser. How the girl wants more of rough sex and ignoring the want in him. May be she could also develop some possessiveness for him. It would be tit for tat then. Good writing author. Keep Sharing your sizzling Erotica with us. Good luck.

Rape is never erotic unless it is a role play

I love it. I have found a good story such as this for a long while. Thank you. Please write more like this.

It's a well written story, but the transition from reluctance to compliance was rather abrupt.

Wow that was interesting.

One if the hottest stories I've read in my life...

Your = belonging to you.

You're = you are.

Please learn the difference.

Um... er... hot hot hot!!!

oh my god please continue this

Hot

bravo

The fact is cops do rape girls.

I normally like this kinda stories but the fact that it was a cop was a bit of a turn off...

I want to read more

Scarlett is a very lucky girl!

It was well written, but only a masochist could have enjoyed what he did.

Not sure about cops raping women. A bit too much like the Sarah Everard case.

That’s not a Rape Fantasy (CNC), it’s just another fantasy story about rape.

Tess (uk)

This is a lot like the Miguel Chronicles.

This is the kind of play I like. Excellent read, written as exactly as it should be. Made me wet just reading it. And now it makes me wanna rough go tonight.

God, this is so hot. Amazing take on a fantasy. I wish there were more stories like this. Well done!

Now I want a sequel.. you have made me a very happy girl..with very achy fingers

Chapter 2 Please!!!!

Anyone wanna play like this, you hit me up like a good girl.

Uh...so I am the only one who does that? ROFL

This story got me soaking wet fantasizing of being in Haley’s place. The thought of being used got me so worked up, I couldn’t control myself. My fingers took over plunging in and out of my soaked womanhood until I exploded in one of the most pleasurable orgasms of my life! I sucked and licked my fingers clean, tasting my own sweet juices, just hoping one day that I will be used like that!!

Where did the couch come from, y'all? Also, what happened to the knife and the clothes? Why mention the exact placement of the knife if it isn't relevant later. If you have a gun on the wall it has to be fired in the third act. This is just bad plotting. Get it together.

xoxo

-gossipgirl782

I loved the story. I felt extremely turned on by the vivid action!!! I am a bit puzzled by the comments about the facts I have to say I’m a bit annoyed that people would try to criticize a short sexual storyline about its facts! I mean do you watch porn and wonder whether those shoes really match the purse or the outfit? No! Ugh! Some people I swear! Great storytelling I enjoyed it!

Hmm... rape... boring.

Great build up, great heat, great writing!

This is FICTION! If you want to get shitty about facts, you're on the wrong site. This story is deliciously wicked and beautifully done. I loved it. More please!

Thank you.

Omg i loved this one.

You're such a good writer and i love one-shots, please write more!

Can’t wait for the next story of them

You have a young woman going to Harvard but declines to press charges against a crooked cop. Not very likely. Plus a female suspect is never transported by a single male officer