All Comments on 'Good Morning'

by JennyX3

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JayWhettJayWhettalmost 12 years ago
Well, I didn't have any trouble following along.

A nice pair of scenes, I thought, and a promising start that could have gone in a number of different directions. I wish they had been developed a little more into a full story.

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