All Comments on 'Good Old Salem'

by Ada LeFay

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
GREAT FUCK STORY..but

You should add how the girl had the Mayor's baby.

darknsteamynightsdarknsteamynightsabout 17 years ago
I like the historical twist

The historical context was pretty exciting. I thought the story as a whole felt a bit rushed. It would have been far more enjoyable if you had been more descriptive and drawn out the sex longer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Blue

It should've been longer bra

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