All Comments on 'Good Times'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Loved it!

Your story is my dream that i wish would come true with a hot blonde receptionist in my office. Every guy wishes this would happen!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Cute twist...

... but it was a little jarring considering the "I should call my wife" thoughts in the story. I understand there was a bit of misdirection intended, but perhaps it was overdone.

The story was delicious, however, and I definitely want more. Keep up those sensual descriptions - much better than just visuals. :)

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