All Comments on 'Goodwife'

Welcome to this site. Good start. Thanks for posting and please continue to delight us with erotic thrills in medieval setting - if that is Your thing. Anyway, it was fun to read.

poor woman, what a life!

- Wall to wall drudgery and only a quick shag with some sweaty yokels for light relief.

Well done.

Sadly very believable, I like your writing style despite the topic. Fantasy stories about rape are a far cry from ‘Rape Fantasies’ so just not my thing. The segue from the rapists to introducing Alison was a little jarring but the intent was easy to pick up.

Maybe using something like....

“Alison was in a good mood, as she sang she thought about her day so far. After having risen before dawn ..”

Back then of course it would have been pretty pointless to cry rape. Some people might have believed her but without a decent independent witness her claims would quite probably be discounted. Religion portrayed women negatively, they were basically considered to be the root of all evil. At one point in time it was believed that if a woman fell pregnant from ‘rape’ then it clearly could not have been rape because a female orgasm was required for reproduction. That train of logic that says well if she enjoyed it she must have invited it.

Great writing, thanks for sharing

Tess (uk)

Keep writing. Hope I'll read more of your work. Something related to a hot queen perhaps ;)

Enjoyable. Please keep writing. Love your style.