All Comments on 'Gordy's Wife'

Thank you. Wonderful story. Didn’t give away the ending.

Cheating is cheating. 1*

Great story! You have some talent.

Fun story, great ending. Please have someone read it before you publish your next one. Have them check for word choice. Every time you wanted to say "Lose," you spelled it "Loose." That is a different word and it does not mean what you think it means. Keep writing.

More Please

Decent story, definitely recommend an editor and some proof reading.

Interesting story. It must suck to be despised by all your relatives like Gordy, but it sounds like he deserved it. Hurts my ass just thinking of riding that far in such a short time. Guess that's why they call it Iron Butt Rally.

Too bad someone got their panties in a wad about cheating, WTF, it's a story for Pete's sake. According to the contract, fidelity had nothing to do with the sexless unconsummated marriage.

Glad it worked out for Andy, made a much better story than if it hadn't, lol. Thanks for writing and posting.

I'm a sucker for a happy ending romance story. Fivw stars.

Liked the story

not a complant would have liked to read more about Gordy getting his just desserts fir his contract chicanery

If you mention a brand and model then better get informed about its features if you want to discribe them.

For the rest its a good story