All Comments on 'Gotta Pay the Piper Ch. 00'

The treatment you gave Wanda’s former lawyer would definitely create the tiger. He’s destroyed as a human being. No hope. Only thing to live for would be the opportunity to absolutely wreck her in the most painful way possible. He does not and will not have any future as deformed and destitute as he is. The “state” would have been more humane to execute him. I’d cheer him on as he went after Wanda.

Well written and thought out. You make a series of good points.

Waste of time. Just continue the story

A very logically thought out and presented case for judicial slavery as an alternative to our current jail system.

Well, a very well thought out plan for a possible slavery institution/proposition. Your thoughts are often matching the ones that I have. Why doesn't a slave try to kill their tormentor? Any animal would kill given a chance. Trust is another concept often left out of the slavery story. In some D/s stories the Dom can punish a sub severely but only within the sub's limits that are discussed beforehand. A safeword is often arranged so that the Dom does not cause permanent pain or harm. A good, well trained, Dom can often push the limits to bring a better experience to both parties. In some slave stories, hope is often beaten out of the slave. Aftercare is always a good way to build trust. If a good Dom provides for their slave so that the slave will try to give their best to push themselves, the slave knows that they will be taken care of afterwards. I give out harsh comments if the Dom just beats the slave and then just leaves them to wallow in their misery.

I like that any slave in your stories are not slaves for life. There is hope out there and a slave can acquire some dignity by working out their sentences. Sure, they are slaves, but there are safeguards built into the system so they are not turned into sex-crazed dolls. Thank you for the well written prolog to your stories.

"Some almost approach the idea of a dystopian society, where a person (usually female) might be accosted in the street and enslaved for life with no control or recourse. The women of course then automatically become mindless sex slaves. The rest of society accepts this as normal."

THIS.

"How would these judicial slaves be any different if they were truly abused knowing that was the only future they would ever see?"

AND THIS.

FINALLY. SOMEONE SAID IT.

I simply cannot get immersed in a story where the premise is humans not behaving like humans. Which is why I've been a long time fan of your Slave Camp series and a long time vocal critic of almost every other slavery series out there.

Also, seconding the point about how in your slave camp series, you put Wanda's former lawyer in a position where, if you did that to a normal human being (think some random guy off the street in our world), there's a pretty significant chance they'd commit suicide, possibly deciding to take someone with them before they died. I still think you should edit that story. But anyway, that series was still way, way, way better than most of the haphazardly written stuff on this site.

Slavery, there are all types of slavery. Most look back on our history and the civil war. The civil was not just about slavery is was about a people fighting to retain their society and way of life which did indeed include slavery. There are tales of despot owners treating slaves terribly using physical abuse to control them and of course there was sexual exploitation also. All of which a normal well adjusted person would frown on. Most of the owners of slaves treated them well as slaves were considered property so why would they do anything to damage their own property? I do not support nor condone slavery in any way this is just the way it was done in our documented history. Today we have a subtle slavery more accurately called involuntary servitude. You I and every gainfully employed person in the United States is a victim of this involuntary servitude. Some may disagree and offer a counter argument bit ii is very true. How so are we subjected to involuntary servitude?

The federal income tax. What you say? The federal income tax is considered a voluntary system of taxation. But, if you choose not to file your taxes and the government finds the you ‘owe’ taxes and you refuse to pay they will exact penalties and more taxes on you so now you will have to work even harder and longer to pay them. This is involuntary servitude. You are not receiving any remuneration for your labors as the government takes it from you to pay the penalties on the taxes they have levied on you.

If you pay your taxes faithfully and diligently you are still working without remuneration to pay your taxes. I don’t know about you by I spend on average about 3 days doing my taxes each year. This occupies my time and takes away from my pursuit of happiness and other endeavors and yet you or I can deduct our worth for the time we spend on filing our taxes. If perchance we hire someone to do our taxes that is deductible but only to the extent making your adjusted gross income less so there again you being forced to fill out tax forms without pay, involuntary servitude its called, basically slavery.

So you see all of us law-abiding taxpayers are basically slaves to our own government. Of course you don’t have to fill out all those burdensome tax forms the government just impute what you owe from the income they have on record and you can pay that. But if it you do it that way you will be paying a lot more taxes they won’t look for all the deductions you may eligible for if you did it yourself.

So there you have it and I’ll say it again we are all slaves to our governments ‘voluntary’ income tax system. Thank you very much!