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Click here"Have you told the other girls about Sherrie's stories?" I asked. Robin nodded and blushed as she confessed they had the first night after the fight. All the others wanted to know about the new slave and were speculating what would happen to her. "I guess you were pretty surprised to find out I bought Sherrie when I brought her home."
"Oh yeah, totally. We never thought we'd see her again." Joanne said. "At camp she gave us some advice about Lenore. Sherrie told us to be really bold but start slow to take advantage of Lenore a little at a time and before she knew it we'd have her wrapped around our little fingers. Lenore would hate it but love it at the same time. She'd realize she was giving up her ass and that would make her even more submissive. Sherrie bragged that no matter which of them wore the collar, she could make Lenore her pet. That was the word she used.. pet. When she walked in the door with you, I about fell down in shock. It is gonna be a fun show to watch Lenore try to handle her."
I asked if Sherrie said anything about Lenore when she came home that first day. Robin blushed again and nodded. "She just said, 'Game on!' and winked at us. But just a little later the fight started."
"Well, you know it was Lenore's decision to buy Sherrie." I said. I wanted to see Joanne's reaction.
She began to giggle. "Well, if half of Sherrie's story was true, that was a dumb move." Joanne laughed. "I'm sorry, Bas. This is where it is hard to be respectful. Of Lenore anyway. Maybe she secretly wants Sherrie to take her over, totally take advantage." I asked what she thought of that. "Oh, I'd love it! Wouldn't you?" she asked Robin. Robin grinned and said 'Hell, yeah!' "Bas, you are always going to be top guy here. We know we tried to be in charge and failed. We totally regret it. You are the boss. But to tell you the truth, I'd like to see Lenore become an unofficial, uncollared slave just like she was at the Hacienda. We are all watching to see if Sherrie can take her down like she claimed. Free or not, Lenore would lose her position. I'd love to see her naked, jumping to Sherrie's commands."
"And if Lenore holds her own?" I asked. Both girls began to giggle. I could tell they did not think much of Lenore's chances.
- COMMENTS
Techumsahabout 2 years agoI hope Lenore is able to keep her spot on top. It sounds like she has a plan or thinks she does. If not I think how bad is written he won't take it well.
Vintage_DMabout 2 years agoServant111 - The world the author writes about is a FICTIONAL world. You have an option either you buy into the premise of the author's work, or you can move on. Me, I don't buy into Sci-Fi, so guess what? I have a headache which I've gotten when I've read something on those lines. Please save us your diatribes and stay with genres where you are comfortable.
In closing, I have a question for you. What is it they say about opinions?
Siska100about 2 years agoIt's clear the last two chapters are setting Lenore up. Can't wait to read how she reacts to Sherrie's attempts at controlling her. I also wonder how the other slaves will use Lenore's submissiveness and where she'll end up. Or will she stay in control? If she does, then how will she do it? Keep writing about Bas and his menagerie.
Finally I have to add, that enjoying your stories doesn't mean I endorse slavery. We the readers have to remember this is fiction.
Gamblnluckabout 2 years agoAuthor@servant 111 Neither this story NOR its predecessor was designed to make slavery in any form palatable or even partially acceptable in a free society. Maybe you do not reach much but there is a whole realm of stories of judicial slavery stories where people walking down the street suddenly find themselves enslaved for life, used as a sexual object with absolutely NO recourse.
This was simply my version of how such a society might work and be palatable, with some suspension of belief. How a group might interact within some kind of lawful constraint. That being a person is enslaved for committing a crime OR , not used in this story as a method to self indenture for a financial reward. It was offered as a way to avoid the very high price of incarcerating criminals and putting them to use. Plausible? Nope, not in our society where we confine criminals NOT to rehabilitate them but merely remove them from society for a period of time. The thought is that loss of freedom will teach them a lesson although as anybody looking at it will realize, recidivism runs rampant.
My story is more of a character study of how a small group might interact within that constraint. Your comment brought about Biblical studies of indenture and the Nazi regime who sought to imprison a group based on religion or ethnic or political reasons. (Most people do not realize the large number of concentration camp victims were based on political views rather than religious.)
But indenture lasted long after slaves were freed. And it was NOT benign. And indentured servant could be treated badly and if they protested could find their indenture extended for years. I am not writing a treatise on slavery, just a simple story of a group of people in a world where it exists. Read it or don't. This is my second series on the subject and probably my last.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoAh, back to the good stuff. People doing dumb things and getting punished for it is great, as were the parts describing the lives of the less fortunate slaves.
The whole Sherrie vs Lenore thing seems like a no brainer to me though. As long as Lenore ignores Sherrie's demands and liberally exercises her right to shove baseball bats up Sherrie's ass whenever Sherrie gets uppity, the issue will soon be resolved.
