by von_Krafft_Ebing
5 stars on every single chapter! you're a great writer and I can't wait to see what you write in the future.
For my own selfish reasons, please write a spin off chapter or an aftermath chapter with more of Kyle's dad and Grace. Those sex scenes were so mind numbingly erotic i almost shot my load into my own eye when usually it just dribbles out pathetically.
I hate Grace as a character, but I am SOOOO curious to see how her life turns out.
I'm glad if you enjoyed this set and appreciate you commenting. Chapter 4 is a logical stopping point. However, I'll likely put together an epilogue for this series. I plan to work on a new story line next.
As always, happy to hear suggestions for improvement from those of you who are more experienced writers than me, either here or in private.
Also always happy to entertain interesting ideas for incorporation into stories from anyone.
I really enjoyed this series and hope you'll consider adding a couple more chapters. I agree with rocketspeedfish. There is also room for a spinoff series.
I enjoyed the series immensely, was surprised you didn't get the mother in law involved as she seemed worse than the wife saying how good her line was.
Hope you can get another one out of it.
Great story, very good writing. Hoping for another chapter soon, you have too many dangling threads to stop now!!