All Comments on 'Grace's Covert Humiliation Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I have enjoyed this series so much. I hope you write more.

satp1p2satp1p25 months ago

Great series, hope you keep writing similar types of stories in the future

rocketspeedfish2rocketspeedfish25 months ago

5 stars on every single chapter! you're a great writer and I can't wait to see what you write in the future.

For my own selfish reasons, please write a spin off chapter or an aftermath chapter with more of Kyle's dad and Grace. Those sex scenes were so mind numbingly erotic i almost shot my load into my own eye when usually it just dribbles out pathetically.

I hate Grace as a character, but I am SOOOO curious to see how her life turns out.

von_Krafft_Ebingvon_Krafft_Ebing5 months agoAuthor

I'm glad if you enjoyed this set and appreciate you commenting. Chapter 4 is a logical stopping point. However, I'll likely put together an epilogue for this series. I plan to work on a new story line next.

As always, happy to hear suggestions for improvement from those of you who are more experienced writers than me, either here or in private.

Also always happy to entertain interesting ideas for incorporation into stories from anyone.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I really enjoyed this series and hope you'll consider adding a couple more chapters. I agree with rocketspeedfish. There is also room for a spinoff series.

JairBrasilJairBrasil5 months ago

excellent exciting story keep going. I loved

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I enjoyed the series immensely, was surprised you didn't get the mother in law involved as she seemed worse than the wife saying how good her line was.

Hope you can get another one out of it.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Good story. But it got a little long.

jb1023jb10232 months ago

Hoping for more chapters in this story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Great story, very good writing. Hoping for another chapter soon, you have too many dangling threads to stop now!!

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I've always enjoyed reading short stories as well as novels. As I also routinely read erotic literature, I decided to try my hand at writing a few short stories in this area. I'm especially interested in exploring the underlying psychology leading to diverse sexual behavior an...

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