All Comments on 'Graham and Griffin Ch. 03'

Awww this is such a sweet story. But I need the chapters to be longer cause they're moving at such a slow pace. Which I think is a good thing being how they're still young & just getting to know each other. But I need longer chapters, before it even starts it over & then I have to wait for the next one.

Story is going really great but can we get longer chapters please? It's a great story that could have been just a very sweet sensual romance without all the chapters. That's slowing it down an taking away from the storyline.

I have to question whether Graham still has feelings for the ex. He broke up b/c he didn't want a LDR but was with the guy for a year. I'd think he'd have felt something. Does that go away b/c you go separate ways? Has Griffin admitted his sexuality to himself even? He seems to not want to even think/hear the word 'gay' b/c he'll have to accept he is.

You will find out about Graham's boyfriend in the next couple of chapters. I'm writing this story chapter by chapter. I guess I should have waited to post it when it was done. Oh, well, too late now :)

.

Second that!! But am loving the story

THESE CHAPTERS ARE SO SMALL YOU COULD PROBERLY GET THE WHOLE FUCKING SERIES INTO ONE PROPER CHAPTER.? LIKE OTHER WRITERS

Love this sweet story.

CHEESY