All Comments on 'Grandma Kate and Me ...'

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Remember Last NightRemember Last Night7 months ago

Part two - Donna enters their bedroom and becomes their adoptive daughter and then becomes pregnant giving them the child they could never have. Keep writing, this was awesome!

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Wish it was the dads mom instead, not enough stories like that

LegendInMyOwnMindLegendInMyOwnMind7 months agoAuthor

Remember Last Night. When inspiration wills a sequel to this, you have given me a good storyline. Thank you.

keepitmoistkeepitmoist7 months ago

Dialogue seems robotic and fake.

PhoenixLore1981PhoenixLore19815 months ago

You had a decent story up until the strap-on being used on him that alone ruined it completely you almost had everyone thinking the guy was a man until that part of the story now everyone knows he isn't shit if the girls was to bring another man in the guy would get on his hands and knees and take him up the ass and enjoy no man would do that no a guy who is bi is not a man shit the girls was probably fucking other men as it was cause they wanted a real man but they don't have 1 all they have is some little bitch who likes taking it up the ass

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