by YDB95
and I loved it. It’s clean and well-written with some interesting, nicely-developed characters. Your settings were vivid, and I felt like I could see the action in my mind. Your writing flows nicely, too. I love the inter-generational aspect. 5*
Thank you for writing, and thank you for sharing your work.
A very nice story about the 50's. only thing missing is a duck tail haircut. Inheriting grandma's bush is weird.
Fabulous story! My lover's rich, thick bush and treasure trail never failed to get me wet! God I miss her.
Nice sweet love story, I like Grandma, straight to it, no beating about the bush.