All Comments on 'Grandma's Christmas Secret'

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ender2k2kender2k2kover 3 years ago
That was wonderful

Thanks

Davester37Davester37over 3 years ago
What a sweet story,

and I loved it. It’s clean and well-written with some interesting, nicely-developed characters. Your settings were vivid, and I felt like I could see the action in my mind. Your writing flows nicely, too. I love the inter-generational aspect. 5*

Thank you for writing, and thank you for sharing your work.

StrattonChambersStrattonChambersover 3 years ago

Very nice, very sweet story.

rodryder44rodryder44over 3 years ago

A very nice story about the 50's. only thing missing is a duck tail haircut. Inheriting grandma's bush is weird.

ValendonValendonover 3 years ago

Fabulous story! My lover's rich, thick bush and treasure trail never failed to get me wet! God I miss her.

SpencerfictionSpencerfictionover 3 years ago

Nice sweet love story, I like Grandma, straight to it, no beating about the bush.

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