All Comments on 'Grandpa's Naughty Adventures 01'

I’m sorry but there is not much literary content/structure and it’s not very erotic. The concept could work, rich powerful man maintains stable of young girls, but everything is so abbreviated and obvious and silly that it’s a challenge to keep reading. This might function as a pure stroke piece but even that is lacking. Hoping your next work is better.

Was done at ten inch cock. No score because I stopped reading after that.

Dewey Cheatham

Needs some serious editing.