by macymadison
One of the best written stories I have read. I look forward to more from you.
In a period of time where uncertainty envelopes all of us, you have masterfully shown us that love, true love should never be forgotten or passed over for appearance sake
Your writing flows effortlessly. As an aging gentleman, I was quite taken with way you handled the loss of his one enduring love and reincarnated her. The continuation of endless love was flawless.
I would enjoy reading more but feel that the telling of this particular relationship should be left to our own imagination.
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I have read this story three times now and without fail it remains my favourite. I feel every emotion. Such a well written story thankyou for sharing it
What a beautiful love story even if it didn’t have a single more than sex. But with the sex of a right on literotica and one of the best anywhere ever
This is a fabulous read. As a widower and a grandfather, I can fully appreciate many if the emotional turmoils you so accurately convey through your writing.
This is a work of art 5 stars all the way 2nd time I have read it. Love it.
I like this story very much, you know the best thing for me is that as I have got older my memory gets shorter so I can read a story a few times and each it seems like the first time. But seriously I enjoyed the story as like one of the other commentators I am a widower and a grandfather, so yes I also get the emotions. Very well done and thought out . A story for our time.
Compelling, delicious, addictive. 5 stars. You could write 100 of these, all similar, and not waste a moment of your time doing so. Kudos.
This exceptionally beautiful piece of writing truly is a work of art. My god I felt I lived a whole lifetime reading it. The journey it took me on was so unexpected, evoking a maelstrom of emotion. Thank you so much for this. Ah, if only they could all be like this...
I do feel like it should come with a warning though as I cried my eyes out at 2 separate parts (if your heart isn't made of stone, you'll know which parts - no one should ever have to suffer the effects, directly or indirectly, of that insidious and unbelievably cruel disease, Alzheimer's). That, however, is simply a testament to the sheer brilliance of this piece of art. Kudos!
What an amazing journey this story turned out to be! When Chelsea started losing her memories of their time together. I was actually in tears. But seeing Reese and Ed begin their journey together, and tying it to Ed's wish to take one more journey for Chelsea, was very touching