by nylonpunkie
Cute story but absolute fantasy land. Women that age can't do four hours, and neither are they wet enough naturally to just begin fucking. There are simply to many discrepancies to make it good. Maybe learn a bit more about we aging girls before you write another tale like this.
I'm old, grey, and ready for sex, but not four hours worth.
I appreciate any feedback, even if I fundamentally disagree with it. I'm thirty years away from being this age but I'm sure there will be some 70 year old readers who'll dispute your assertion. I'm thankful for your comment :)
Absolutely enjoyed myself reading through it. Looking forward to what you write next!
fantastic!!!! I really enjoyed.
70's and 30 years diffences maybe defficult at reality? but 60s, after i d read this, I thought its possible be romantic relation with.
the heroine is so cute
No doubt you are one of the premier writers from among all the literotica genre. Critics who disagree with your biology are missing the point. 95% of all these stories are highly improbable.
Love to read your nonerotic literature as well..excellent character development...Best