All Comments on 'Grass Greener'

Awesome, loved the way you describe the older couple very real. We all get older and our looks change but still can be sexy.

Kudos for coming up with something different. 4*

Well written build up and good flow as the sex scenes unfolded. That said, I can never get my arms around swinging like Dani and Matt. Married for some "x" period of time with no discussion about why they have no children, what they do and how they got to that point in their lives. Also, I had to suspend "belief" to think that John and Claire went from voyeurs to swinger in minutes. 4* - mostly due to the quality narrative and plot progression.

I loved this and hope you continue the story. You could probably use an editor as a few spelling errors and name switches were distracting but other than that it was superb!

Five stars for this one and the same for Ashley's adventure. I wanted to read that before deciding to follow you, which I have done. A few glitches with word use ("Cue" is a word you need to look up.) and other things but enough hot sex to earn the rating.

Loved it please write some more

I surprisingly really enjoyed it. Five stars

Great story....Dani initiated the kiss with Claire....but Claire stepped up the action with Dani, apparently surprising herself how much she liked the lady to lady action.."Even Claire looked surprised she had done it', i.e cupped the puss, says it all

Can't wait to Claire and Dani escalate their love..

Very hot story. A little longer than your first. Probable needs a little more exploration. Normally would not rate this try of story very high but since no one was degraded or hurt and it sounded like clean fun with couples not trying to get something on the other to use against them. I gave it 4 stars. Guess we will see if you continue the story.

Needs a sequel, NO?

loved it. How long before Saturday comes here?