All Comments on 'Grave Babies'

Very Hot! Will there be a followup chapter or two to this one, sort of let hanging with questions unanswered. Love a good scary tale.

Very tense and hot tale, extremely well written, garnished with some nifty and truly memorable lines. Good luck in the contest.

You have to go on and finish this. There are too many unanswered questions. Who were those umm blue people and what the hell came out of the rapest woman? And what kind of baby will Olivia have? And what about Noah and Jack? Do they have any side effects from the ummmm rape? You have to answer these questions or I will be forced to make it up myself. (and you do a much better job of it than me)

OK, that was weird - and I mean that in a good way.

Hoping there'll be a second instalment to answer some of the million or so questions I have!

so much that I don't give a hell what stories you put out there- I'm eager for anything! I do have to say this was a little weird and left me more confused than moved, but I don't care!!! I gave you a five and hope that you win the contest. Thank you for writing, and please continue to share your talent with us eager readers! Can't wait to read more! xoxo- CrueltobeKind