All Comments on 'Gravedancer'

I LOVE these stories I wish you still wrote! Like one of the mist escaping and maybe finding his own partner. This world you've created has had me coming back for almost a decade! Fingers crossed you'll make a return

I have enjoyed this series so very much. Your storytelling is phenomenal. Thank you!!

I think you missed an opportunity with Darrow's tail. He could have been teasing in 3 or 4 places at once; cock, tail and 2 hands.

I agree with the proof reading and that some more sex wouldn't go amiss but other than that I really liked this story series.

Oh also I think the demons could speak a little more old school, they are supposed to be ancient.

Really enjoyed this. Awesome story.

I read Michelle and Lucifer's story first, and then Kara's story and then this, so it is awesome!

I am really getting into your stories, thank you. However you really need a proof reader. In past stories Darrow refered to Claire as "Ms. Harding" in this this story he called her "Ms. Hasting" which is it? Also would LOVE more sex!

I've enjoyed this series immensely...very well done :)

I also love how you linked it the The old king and the new bride. That just made me want to read that series too... speaking of which,I've got another series to read!

Why must it end???? :'( I sincerely love this series.

I really loved the storyline, and the fact that Claire was willing to give herself up for her lovers.

I really like you work, but would you consider re-posting all the chapters of this story as one submission as when I go back to re read them I get lost. Also for the story about Lucifer could you please throw in some more bondage scenes, I liked the one in this chapter and I think it would fit the plot with his short temper and intimacy issues.

Thanks for a great story, keep writing.

But your spelling mistakes make me crazy!

Hurry Hurry with Lucifer's tale

*****

beautiful

Sad to see it end, but also looking foward to Lu's tales, haha oh man that one will be interesting.