All Comments on 'Gray Jedi Ch. 09'

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FormerReader almost 7 years ago

Exciting

Jax and Laranth are a bit different than what they were in the books but in this case thats a good thing. I always thought they should get together. Also, from what I've been hearing about Episode 8 Luke may be heading in a Gray direction and dispense with the whole jedi/sith thing. Wouldn't it be funny if you somehow managed to beat them to the punch?

Anonymousalmost 7 years ago

Great Read!

I have been literally waiting for months for you to continue this story! When I saw it last night, I about hit the roof. Very exciting read. Cannot wait to continue this story! Just one thing... please don't take 3 months for the next chapter.

Anonymousalmost 7 years ago

Jesus Christ keep writing

I honestly don't care if you never have sex in this story again. I'm hooked on the story alone. Keep writing.

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