All Comments on 'Great Grandpa Jack'

by DeniseDalton

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AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 4 years ago
Very fun read

Nice way to tease Great Gramps

Scott_FreeScott_Freeover 4 years ago
A Really Good Read

I must confess that I've never really read any age play stories beyond a few MILF ones. I really enjoyed the story, and would like to read more of your work. It is especially good for a first submission. That one is always the hardest.

Scott Freeman

x_pac6969x_pac6969over 4 years ago
Good start

Good start to what could become a hot story. No mention if your on birth control as I suspect great granpa will eventually want to dump his load in your hot cunt

Bak2DFutureBak2DFutureover 4 years ago
Nasty

Not a very nice story. She should have had him locked up....tasteless

dlearyousdlearyousover 4 years ago
What is in the post album

Can not wait to find out where this goes

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Good start

Nice story, really exciting. Hope you write more about them. Thanks!!!

mxzermxzerover 4 years ago
nice

just wanted t let you know i really enjoyed the story. sure hope you plan to give us more of this naughty grampa

DadMannDadMannover 4 years ago
Beautiful deflowering

Young girl gets what she asks for and more.

Love these large age gap stories, especially where the 'nice old man' end up being a wolf, taking control, making the girl cum and then deflowering her.

Too bad he pulled out

NeverSaysNoNeverSaysNoalmost 4 years ago
More please!

So hot, would love more

brady20brady20about 3 years ago

Wow got to be more Awesome please write more soon

eroenthusiasteroenthusiast5 months ago

This was great well done.

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I'm Denise Dalton. My friends call me Den. Love kinky stories, both reading and writing, and hearing from people that share my fetishes. I have a preference for younger men -- much younger men. Especially an older woman in a domineering role abusing a position of power and s...