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by Silvercatseye

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morefunnmorefunnabout 14 years ago
Lovely Tale

Well written and a wonderful little story. Thanks for sharing your work.

dliterdliterabout 14 years ago
Perfect start

Ok that was a perfect start, now take it on from there! Does he realize he loves his sister, or how much she loves him? Does he remember she was a virgin and did she get pregnant?

Please keep going.

sexmatesexmateabout 14 years ago
Very nice Start.

You have a nice writing style!

I look forward to another chapter!

Thanks for writing!

oldwayneoldwayneabout 14 years ago
It was a fantastic first page.

I hope it is correct to presume that there will be more.

AzPilotAzPilotabout 14 years ago
I agree, the story was well written and left an opening for a continuation.

Thank you for an entertaining interlude. I hope you take the time to do many more.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 14 years ago
A well written story

Beautifully written with love and sex mixed into a complete story. Thanks for the good read.

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