All Comments on 'Green Eyes and Green Panties'

I enjoyed it. The plot drew me in. The cast of characters is different and hot. Looking forward to part 2.

A lot! the few typos were easy to gloss over, and the occasional awkward phrase didn't detract at all. 5*

Liked the story very much. You need a good editor but, the story has great possibilities.

Editors are worth a point. Find one and gain a star.

Drunk in her own home, I can't see Teri running back to her bedroom.

While this is a good story, it's also canned spam. I rather expected Sheri to be braless, knowing she'd back Maureen into a corner.

I liked the story but you need an editor or at the Very least reread the story with a critical eye. I am sure you ran it through spell check, but, there are some sentences in there that make no sense. Like the last line. She turned off the lap and ran back to her own room.

Stephen Please do find the time to write us all another chapter or two as I have so enjoyed reading all you have woven for us to indulge in as we read through . Thank You so much for your time and craft .

Hugs

Kathryn... xxx

This story has endless and sexy possibilities. Please continue!!

For the read.

Would have been an all right story but for the punctuation, it was all over the place. Made it difficult to follow what you were trying to tell us. Like others have suggested, get someone to edit before posting please.

This isn't prose We are Anaiis Nin. At times the flow is more important than the elocution

next night Will is in Teri's bed and then every weekend

Good story and the writing is just fine. Took time to get there but that is how life is. Need to see more of this story