All Comments on 'Green Panties'

Very enjoyable story!

5

Loved it, 5*

Very, very good, R410a! Thanks for writing!

Wow, that twitterpated reference was obscure. Had to hit up a search engine to understand that line. What are the odds these two would both be familiar with a deleted scene from a movie made in 1942?

Loved. Twitterpated from Bambi was a nice touch.

A solid story of ordinary people pursuing an ordinary goal: family life, children, solid careers, love and stability. How dull, how marvelous! 5*

Great Story, Great writing. I love a happy ending. Very Romantic. Thanks 5 stars. good job.

One of the best stories I have ever read on this site and that's several years. Well done.

Lol, Bambi isn't very obscure.. A Disney classic ;). A great story as always, thank you R410a

Very nice! Well written and so worth 5 stars. You really dated yourself with 'twitterpatter', loved it and it fit perfectly. Be interesting to see who else picks up the term.....

Like it.

In the Syracuse area, It's spelled Onondaga Lake. two o's.

Thank you for sharing your wonderful writing gifts in another sweet and tender story. 5*****

On another note, the female lead in several of your other stories was told something like. “…to hold onto a man, keep his belly full and his balls empty.”

I’ve often wondered what the equivalent saying for the male would be. You’ve offered one excellent possibility in this story…

****My late dads words rang loud in my ears, "Son, when you find the right girl just remember that you have to continue doing what you did to win her in order to keep her."****

Just think how the divorce rate would plummet IF more of us guys and gals would practice those guidelines.

Very sweet

Well, it can happen that way. The empty nest does come. But, the rest is always a mystery. I wish you youngun's the best of luck.

I enjoyed the story, especially reminiscing about my time in the Air Force as well. For the most part, the story flowed well but some of the thoughts/emotions of Russ were neglected. You made it seem like some parts of his progression with Gail was because he didn't have a better plan. She went from average looks to gorgeous overnight with no transition or reason for it, among other gaps. The physical interactions were well told, just the emotions that should tie them together in a romance story were weak. 4* (Maybe I should change my pen name to R717? LOL)

Loved the story, had me smiling just about all the way through. Got to love them green panties, lol.

Good story. Protagonist has got to be the slowest dolt ever. His dates are more likely to fall asleep than “get some.”

Another R410a masterpiece! Well done indeed and thank you for introducing us, your fans, to yet another beautiful loving couple. Thank you for the fantasy and your gifted writing style.

Cheers

SAGE

Nice story, about nice people, nicely told.

I knocked it down 1/2 star for having Gail prone, while flat on her back, on page 3. If you are _prone_ then you are face down. If you are face up, then you are _supine._. A pet peeve of mine.

Oh well, gotta round up from 4.5 to 5 stars. ;^)

Fantastic love story. 5stars

Very nice story. 5*

Great love story, fare made sure they found eachother.

Believable and fairly engaging but needs savage editing. Far too long winded.

This is the 2nd story i have read of yours , and i plan i reading a lot more , so keep em coming lol ,you have now been added to my favorite list .

Thankyou for the time you give to write for the readers .

Sweet and very enjoyable story. Sorry I didn’t catch it earlier. 5*

Did Gail lodge a rape charge against the Doctor????

Why couldn't Gail get a restraining order against Doug???

Did the bitch sister Lisa also attend their wedding????

Another great story. Your making it so that I don't even think about reading any other writers stories. Another 15 stars.