All Comments on 'Green Piece'

Pick a name for a character and use it, your dani-doni-terra whatever the F her name was wore out fast. Skipped to end and gave you a 1.

i thought the dani/terra dichotomy worked really well! people are multi-faceted, and those who can appreciate different sides of their lover are lucky. your description of the Green Chapel was breathtakingly gorgeous. and i enjoyed the humor running throughout.

Please bear no mind to the post by anom. That person obviously cannot handle more than a simple thought or concept at a time.Your descriptions throughout this story is exellent. Making the reader picture everything that you describe in detail.

5* is not enough for your weaving of senses throughout this tale.

You have a great style and voice to what you right. A fantastic read. And utterly true to the contest theme.

Wow! This was a treasure. Your descriptions and prose were amazing. The way the protagonist describes Dani and why he calls her Terra! Character Development at its finest