All Comments on 'Greener Pastures'

This is really good. Like, this is REALLY good. I cannot emphasize it enough: this is really, REALLY good. Like, the prose, the build-up, the everything. It's not even "prose," because that suggests it's "prosaic," and this is nothing short of poetry. I dunno what you're doing posting on Literotica, but I'm glad you are, because I got to read this.

What an amazingly different story! 5*