All Comments on 'Greg and Allie 01: The Beginning'

A great start. I hope this remains a love story.

I was thinking with your last story that I would like to see you break away and try something a little different than your usual. I am really happy to see this.

Again, the start of another wonderful story. I understand the reason for chapters, but I hate them when I run across a story such as this. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

So far, this story is looking like it will be one of your best ever. I hope to see the next installment soon.

my friend! This very different! It is also very good! Loved it!

You are one of the best writers on this site. Your stories have such passion and the buildup to the sexual scenes is incredible.

I would love to see this in a possible 4 or 5 part series?

5 stars and have a great holiday season.

Its a very special story and I look forward to see how you continue it.

What a great story, I love that you took the time to introduce us and explain the people. I was crying myself over his mom and it was beautiful.

Interesting story!

5

Surprised me doing a love story , but you nailed it I guess a writer is a writer and having good material in your mind makes the story . A *5* from me on this one!

knew where it was head but dont think u meant to hide it. was honest and well written, not really my cup of tea but enjoyed for a romance. interested where u are going to take it. ty for the read

Wonderful story by the best. Keep it going, maybe they'll have a family together...

Another great story, can’t wait for the continuation

_ _ Well done sir. I look forward to more.

_ _ Thank you for your effort.

I like! This could be a very enjoyable series. Glad to see you branching out and challenging yourself as a writer to try a new genre. You have proven you have the talent now let's see it blossom. I'll be watching for future publications of "Greg and Allie". Take your time to develop the story line and enjoy the ride as much as your fans do. Their meeting with the lawyer should be interesting not to mention how their friends and folks who have known them as brother and sister all their lives will react. Still Greg has been away from home pretty much for five years. Oh hell I'll quit fantasizing! I want to read your fantasy. Can't wait for the next installment!

5 stars for this one.

Cheers

SAGE

thank you for this new venture outside your usual category. I am looking forward to its continuation, but please do not under any circumstances take this back to the “Loving Wife” genre. These characters deserve better, both of them do. 5*

You are starting to surprise me. Nice job.

Takes all the drama and spice out of the formation of their love affair. Oh, neat, you're not my sister after all; ok, let's fuck. Its only a "porn" site if you make your stories conform to the base expectations of the masturbation crowd. Your choice.

Thanks for the effort.

It took me a while to get a chance to read. I am going to stick with it but in all honesty it was pretty obvious and telegraphed before the first page was even half way through.

Well, it wasn’t a surprise, more of a fairytale. I read somewhere that boys and girls who grow up together as brother and sister usually don’t develop an attraction psychologically. But what do I know. Both apparently have had some prior experience, though. The patience of her to spend years waiting around was odd- we only live once.

It might have been a good story if it was finished and not left hanging

Great story; if not your typical Tramp story.

Sorry, no. Hell no. I don't care if they are not blood related. it's still incest. If an adopted son is a real son, someone you grew up with thinking it was your sister, she's your sister. I don't care if she isn't blood related to him she is still his sister.

Predictable

Heart Warming, Loved it. I love a happy ending. Cudos to Saddle Tramp for another winner! 5 stars

What a start to a warm and loving tale between Allie and Greg, can't wait to see where it goes next. Well done 5/5

His mother the skank!! Good for him and Allie

Just a bit to much of how brave and services background for me

Don't bother with this story. It is another incomplete story on Literotica.

I enjoyed the story so far. Different from your usual, but enjoyable. You have great scores for the first three sections.

Felt like you were building up to something. Like Marc was going to show up with a rape gang to teach them a lesson or kidnap Allie and drug her into compliance or something requiring heavy ordnance or Greg beating an entire gang to death using his MMA skills.

Or the Morality Defence League (a violent group obviously founded in Great Britain) coming after them for "marrying your sibling". Maybe with extreme prejudice. And the subsequent involvement of some of your other characters to help eliminate this threat. Roland Waters was favorite character of mine, as was his Thompson gun (so fun to shoot). Glad that Roland is back, hope his skills are needed, after all of all the Thompson gunners old Roland is the best.

To be continued and then nothing?? Watch out, a crazed Greg and Allie fan may go all "Misery" on you.

Great stories. Thanks. The first three stories complete the Greg and Allie "beginnings" so happy you wrote them irregardless of future installments.

A great beginning

I am OKS72. To Anon:

Guardianship is NOT adoption and is part of living trusts. There are specific rules especially concerning money. Guardianship can also be assigned by the state.

good job tramp really good