by yaowa
Well, I can't let be thinking that the ultimate let-down for most women must be to ask her lover what's his ultimate sexual fantasy and then to get the answer: 'Bring in another woman!'
Besides that your story didn't arouse me, without me being able to tell you exactly why. Somehow any excited interplay and anticipation didn't transfer to me as a reader - but it could be only me not being in the right mood. Can just recommend next time to try focusing even more on the emotional aspect of the sexual play.