All Comments on 'Grief, Lust, and Consequences Ch. 02'

I absolutely LOVE Emily! She's freaking awesome! I assume that you're ending this story here. It's not a bad choice for a stopping point, but I'm hopeful that more chapters will be coming. Very good story! 5/

Noe this is how a brother/sister incest story is supposed to be told! No friends, family or even complete strangers getting involved with them. No threesomes and no whole family group sex romps. Just a loving brother and sister, as it's meant to be. 10* Hoping that you'll continue the story and keep it just as good.

Just bob on. We’ll written and very believable.

God, this was so satisfying to read! A wonderfully written bro-sis romance story. I wish them and little Lacy a happy life together and not to forget Em, an amazing and understanding human being. 5/5

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Brilliant story, absolutely loved it, that’s how incest stories need to be, full of love passion and wild sex - can’t wait to read more. I was also expecting lots of pregnant bare foot sex whatever happened to that though

Well shit, that was an amazing story. Very captivating. Held my attention right up until the end. This is how an incest romance story should be. I even wish it was a bit longer showing more of their life with future children, them growing up, and so on. But hey, that's just a minor nitpick.

Was hoping for more Bethany drama but honestly the way she reacted is classic of those with selfish, self-obsessed personalities. She cared more about herself and how everything affected her rather than her husband. And she doesn't seem to have much of an appetite for sex either so no real loss there. Plus not wanting kids is a dealbreaker for a lot of guys. Let someone else deal with that mess. I swear it's like she was imagined as a character that checks as many things off the "Shitty Wife Criteria" list. Best of luck to her new beau.

This was such an amazing, wonderful, and heart warming story. I loved it so much. Thank you for writing and sharing it.