All Comments on 'Grier the Ramrod'

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therangerwilltherangerwillalmost 6 years ago

Great story, please continue with it.

GcoachGGcoachGalmost 6 years ago
not as good as usual

Hope it gets better. This was not to your usual standards for eroticism.

Very slow and tame for you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Well written story dear. You deploy your stories very well. However, most rapers remain without any law punishment. Moreover, you may present that women is receiving much satisfaction from a rape. We must not forget that BDSM and role playing if different from rape. Women are humans with free-will. In real life, even if a woman is feeling sexual satisfaction in a rape, this does not make the rape, lawful, and in most countries, rapers can be in jail for many many years.

Sincerely,

Elias

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I write because I enjoy it. I've been weaving erotic stories since I was a teenager - first with my sister, then by myself. I have published my stories on a variety of sites. I'm always looking to improve. So send me your feedback! My Jack Grierson series of stories is a bod...