All Comments on 'Grieving Time Pt. 01'

by GforGraham

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Wang4 over 4 years ago

Very Good Start

A very entertaining and yes a realistic story. You are developing your characters well and the story can go in several different directions with what and who you have introduced so far

chytown over 4 years ago

Best Story I have Read Today*****

Very entertaining read looking forward to Pt. .02. Thanks for sharing.

arrowglass over 4 years ago

A really good one!!!

Looking forward to more!

Anonymousover 4 years ago

Great start

Thoroughly enjoyed the story. I can easily envision several more chapters and hope to see them.

Anonymousover 4 years ago

Really liking this story.

With your imagination and skill I'm looking forward to many more chapters of funnnn.

IEnjoyErotica about 2 years ago

The story just stops with too many things hanging

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I want to write more stories floating in my head, hoping they are shorter. Had 3+ years but cancer is back and treatment is starting. Hopefully this time can be rid of it. 11 Sep 20. Trying to get back to writing. It's slow going, as after 8 weeks of daily radiation treatment ...

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