Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.
You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.
Click here
It never even entered their minds about contraception, until well after he had filled her vagina for the third time. They were resting when he had the sudden thought that maybe she wasn't taking any precautions. He had been so caught in the moment he had forgotten about the box of condoms in the top drawer beside the bed. Then as he thought further, he realised that he didn't care at all if she got pregnant.
They both went to sleep just as he was thinking of babies, and his last silent thoughts were, "Jenny. I will always love you. Bye."
~~~~~~
Hope you are enjoyed this story.
There are some unfinished threads, and I am undecided on whether to complete them in a last chapter or two or three.
Yes, there are still the two FWBs to decide on. Do they get pushed aside now that he has a new toy?
The girls are in limbo as to whether they just teased him or really wanted more?
Then there is the question of his sister and niece with their morning escapades. Will there be more to it?
Does Martin cause further problems, or will he get dumped into a prison cell and be forgotten? Justice may catch up, but it takes its own sweet time about it.
Did she get pregnant? Did she care? Will they live happily ever after?
Does anyone really care? Have I bored enough people with this tale?
This story became more complex and longer than I planned. Must learn to stick to my original plan in future.
I have some other irons in the fire, so need to think about this story for a bit.
Any helpful feedback and comments appreciated.
Don't feel shy to comment on how brilliant I am. ;)
Voting with lots of stars is always appreciated.
- GfG.
- COMMENTS
ereaderlabout 1 year agoGood story,
I agree there are several open questions, one not mentioned was: what Trish was alluding to with "but you might be surprised at what I'll want from you."
But I don't see any easy way to wrap it all up. I'd love to see you try.
I disagree with the comment "she lied - dump her" I would have agreed until hearing the reason, basically she was subconsciously wanting to be dumped while also not. Her fear of her virginity was tearing her apart. She was afraid of getting too close to anyone.
Anonymousover 1 year agoIt is a good story apart from ending too soon and too hurriedly.
I think because so may stories on Lit have hurried endings or endings with too many questions still unanswered that being able to plan and write the end of a good story must be as difficult, or even more difficult, than coming up with the story line .
If an author raises points in a story, those points must be finished off.
Alfred Hitchcock famously said
"If you show a bomb to the audience (He was one of the finest script writers, but we would say "readers") then you must show the bomb exploding. If not, the audience feels robbed." Even unpaying ungrateful ones.
So in this stories issues that have been strongly suggested and vividly portrayed would be his budding sexual relationship with his sister and niece. Being the man with a sense of morals as he has been portrayed, one can assume that those buds would be nipped in the bud.
His sister, also a person with high standards and morals would also want it to stop if he had a girlfriend.
His friends with benefits relationship with his sisters 2 friends. With what has been written about these relationships so far in the story, I guess the best thing for him is to end it with them both and then have a full confession time to Trish with the view of her meeting Ronnie and Tina along with him and Ashley.
These 2 women are a huge part of his circle of friends and a large part of his needed support base, which he will still need despite him being "in love". They unwittingly prepared him so he could have a relationship with Trish.
As for the brother in law, well anything bad for him would be karma. So for him, anything from contracting AIDS, or becoming a paraplegic by jumping through a window after getting caught by a jealous husband, or ending up in a drive by shooting to a 20 year jail sentence. All good endings.
Another 2 or 3 paragraphs could have covered all those unanswered questions, it did not need to be a lengthy chapter or two.
Just don't leave it hanging.
Read IEnjoyErotica's comment if you think I am too far off the mark.
Good luck.
Please keep writing.
A R W
