All Comments on 'Grocery Store Run'

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jmcharl1jmcharl1over 5 years ago
Not really a romance story

This should be in erotic coupling category. Not a bad story but only giving it 3 stars because it isn’t a romantic story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
True

Not a romance story, but a good fuck story. Thanks for your time and imagination.

tazz317tazz317over 5 years ago
GROCERS

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Happy horseshit!

How did he know her name? Osmosis?

Was there a reason a small defenseless woman would welcome a strange male into her home and offer him a shower? Much less fuck and suck.

It was not a believable setup. And the cost of her groceries was unbelievable as well. You have to construct your stories more logically because the gaps are too big to gloss over.

R.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Garbage!

Other comments have covered some of it, but such language fuckups as "over here", (overhear), and "rot-iron", (wrought-iron), etc, make for a challenging read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Lost It

I am afraid I lost the thread due to errors in flow. Too unreal a situation particularly in the US!

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