All Comments on 'Groping a Woman on Train'

by sadboi23

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
WTF

What a creep

LAHomedogLAHomedogalmost 4 years ago
Good But Inconsistent

I like public groping stories, in general. Good effort. My problem was her emotions and reactions are inconsistent. Is she angry? Scared? Turned on? Sad? She can be angry and still physically turned on. You are raping her. The physical reaction is automatic. What is her true and consistent feelings?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Wow

You should have gotten off when she got off and fucked her hot cunt.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

I feel like you don’t understand how women’s clothes work. Also, her outfit changed throughout the story?

sadboi23sadboi23almost 4 years agoAuthor
"change of clothes"

@anonymous

umm... she was in shirts and pants in the whole story... i'm sorry, did i mess it up somewhere? :/

sadboi23sadboi23almost 4 years agoAuthor
@LaHomedog

well her feelings are mixed, she is conservative, her body reacts to it but she hates that she made her feel like a slut. at the end she was angry and frustrated that she couldn't do anything about it cause she felt humiliated. i hope that makes sense.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Can we get a Pt. 2?!

Loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
What a jerk.

Five stars.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Enjoyed but

Enjoyed on the whole but you switched from pants and shirt to a dress at the end. It felt like I had switched stories...

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
loved it

loved the story and gave it five stars.

as the other comments say, yes, her clothes changed to a dress at the end. It's in the third to last paragraph.

merrySMmerrySMover 3 years ago
Loved it.

Love groping stories. You did this very well. Wish there was more, but that sometimes ruins the story by getting silly and ridiculous. Nice if you could see her again and end up fingering her and slipping your dick into her. Might need a longer train ride.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Second encounter?

Given that they ride on the same line is there a chance we'll get to see them meet again and see him force her into an affair with him.

viciouswomanbeaterviciouswomanbeaterover 2 years ago

great story. i love the way he just did what ever he wanted to.

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