by sadboi23
I like public groping stories, in general. Good effort. My problem was her emotions and reactions are inconsistent. Is she angry? Scared? Turned on? Sad? She can be angry and still physically turned on. You are raping her. The physical reaction is automatic. What is her true and consistent feelings?
I feel like you don’t understand how women’s clothes work. Also, her outfit changed throughout the story?
@anonymous
umm... she was in shirts and pants in the whole story... i'm sorry, did i mess it up somewhere? :/
well her feelings are mixed, she is conservative, her body reacts to it but she hates that she made her feel like a slut. at the end she was angry and frustrated that she couldn't do anything about it cause she felt humiliated. i hope that makes sense.
Enjoyed on the whole but you switched from pants and shirt to a dress at the end. It felt like I had switched stories...
loved the story and gave it five stars.
as the other comments say, yes, her clothes changed to a dress at the end. It's in the third to last paragraph.
Love groping stories. You did this very well. Wish there was more, but that sometimes ruins the story by getting silly and ridiculous. Nice if you could see her again and end up fingering her and slipping your dick into her. Might need a longer train ride.
Given that they ride on the same line is there a chance we'll get to see them meet again and see him force her into an affair with him.