by thrillerauthor
Thanks for a good laugh and an equally good piece of writing. If only such a transformation were so easy....
Interesting. So...where do I get a galloon of Atrazine ? Even better, a pool ? I'll pay anything.
It makes me wish that there was something like that out there .If there was the person would be making millions.
...As a wild tale I don't think I've read any better, hated the main character and it was hard sometimes to want to bother reading about him/her. That he was changed for the better was a hopeful side effect, and made it interesting. After 20 years in SF, I can tell you that your locations were spot on, and that made it easier to place myself within the story. Excellent writing and you did a pretty fair job doing your homework on the TG'd... Thanks for a very 'thrilling' read, and hope to see more like this from you. Cheers! --- Josie
That was so damn stupid and so damn funny that I'm STILL laughing at how bad this was. Absolute garbage.
In part 2, her past could catch up with her, resulting in her being blackmailed into being a sex slave for the law firm. ;-p