by thrillerauthor
In part 2, her past could catch up with her, resulting in her being blackmailed into being a sex slave for the law firm. ;-p
That was so damn stupid and so damn funny that I'm STILL laughing at how bad this was. Absolute garbage.
...As a wild tale I don't think I've read any better, hated the main character and it was hard sometimes to want to bother reading about him/her. That he was changed for the better was a hopeful side effect, and made it interesting. After 20 years in SF, I can tell you that your locations were spot on, and that made it easier to place myself within the story. Excellent writing and you did a pretty fair job doing your homework on the TG'd... Thanks for a very 'thrilling' read, and hope to see more like this from you. Cheers! --- Josie
It makes me wish that there was something like that out there .If there was the person would be making millions.
Interesting. So...where do I get a galloon of Atrazine ? Even better, a pool ? I'll pay anything.
Thanks for a good laugh and an equally good piece of writing. If only such a transformation were so easy....