by Fitnerd7
I wasn't too sure after the first chapter, but after fixing the pacing this is great!
Your main character is the epitome of a Mary Sue, couldn't get through the first quarter of this.
Keep it up and don't forget the giantess tag or Amazon...that was a really fun bit!
Loved this morphing sex adventure with lessons of ethics. I really would have loved to she Laura suggest to Rick to leave Maddie with a gift after all the humiliation she took. To give Maddie an ass she would like better than her present ass, a big soft very jiggly ass and some DD tits with huge nipples. Both smaller than Laura but sexier and more pleasing than before to Maddie, but a bit of embarrassing to Maddie ( the huge size of the nipples and the extra jiggle of her ass) to remind her of Laura's superiority. Follow Maddie's new body with a good ploughing by Rick with Laura's new sex craving to suck Maddies huge 1" wide X 3" long nipples.
I'm really glad you like the story and share my weird fetishes. AHAHA
Your story is so hot! I love expansion fetishes as well, and I can see that this is a step up from your previous chapter! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
I'm very much liking this story so far. I can't wait for the rest!