All Comments on 'Growing Up Ch. 02'

This is too mixed up. I don't know what the fuck you're talking about half the time and I don't think you do either. A woman gives another woman a prostate exam??

A digital rectal exam (DRE) is a test for both men and women. It allows a doctor to check the lower rectum, pelvis, and lower belly for cancer and other health problems, including: Prostate cancer in men. Blood in the stool or an abnormal mass in the anus or rectum.

A little knowledge is a dangerous thing. I usually ignore Anonymous comments but I have made an exception in your pathetic case, as it may save someone's life

'Nuff said!

Once again, there are too many players and the story line is confusing. Slow it down.

You should concentrate on finishing the 3 stories that you started prior to this one.

Since when do women have prostates?

You should keep writing, but make some sense of it while you do. There's too much repetition of what you do with each woman. The description of the sex you have with them gets boring when it matched. Why do online role play when you have the real thing?

Remember that quality is much preferred to quantity, especially in writing.

more please maybe he knocks his mom up and kate also

Five stars hope to read more very soon.

good story, find an editor and learn a bit of biology, at least as it relates to sex

Your stories never fail to make my cock hard as a rock. Just 1 thing though, women don't have prostates.

Great mature/incest story. One glaring error was when Babs did a prostate exam on kate. She couldn't have found much as a female does not have a prostate....

Just too many players. One would be delightful two....a little too much.