All Comments on 'Growth Spurt Pt. 01'

Please continue, I've read similar plots but it never gets old. Please don't get to crazy with his penis size.

I don't know why but these kinds of stories when well written while funny are awesome. This one is well written. Can't wait for the next chapter

The story would be excellent if only he were a little taller. Something like 5'7 wouldn't make him seem tall but not excessively short either. How about you include it in the next part that increase in height was also an unexpected outcome of this.

Great job. Can't wait for the rest of the series.

I can't wait to read part two. Is Jimmy going to fuck all the Doctors? Is Jimmy going to fuck his mom? This is so hot.

Love it. More chapters please

that was a great read I did enjoy it.

there are so so many ways this story can turn twist and run ... and I'd like you to write them all. keep up the great work looking forward to seeing what Jimmy gets up to.

cheers

Hot and great flow, easy to read. No big deal, but you might have a couple of contradictory sentences with the 'box of rocks' thing. +5 absolutely!

Excellent start to this story.

Looks to have plenty of potential for development with not only Delia and the medical team but the subtle hint of incestuous sex with his mother.

Keep it up (so to speak).

I like where this is going and can’t wait for the next instalment.

I neeeed a new chapter!! U should make his cum contain the medication that makes his mom more busty and makes her exude pheromones so mom son cant stop fucking like bunnies. He cums in her and her tits grow and start lactating. He milks her tits n his cock gets bigger again :)

Enjoyable romp in the making.

Careful with being consistent. Main one was: He rang the emergency number and ... nothing. Never mentioned again. Why gave an emergency contact if it is ignored.

4 stars is being tight but 5 stars is being too generous - I'm caught in the middle.

Not at all a bad start - so here's hoping that ensuing chapters will be better still and have a fair bit more sexual content and activity.

Don't go getting carried away with his dick size; perhaps divert some of the growth to his balls or to his spunk production instead. A monster dick is of no real use to anyone normal.

Also, avoid jumping into the present tense and back to the past - ruins the continuity and interrupts the flow of words.

First things first, thanks for all the comments! (Sorry about not editing better about that damn "box of rocks" joke...)

Secondly, chapter 2 is awaiting approval (as of this writing) from Literotica. I'm still adding chapters and I don't currently have an ending in sight... yet! Once part 2 is "live", I'll add the 3rd part to be reviewed, and so on... I'm doing it this way to make sure a part doesn't get uploaded out of order. I just finished part 5, by the way. So a bit of patience is needed, but it will be rewarded!

Finally, for a little tease, I can guarantee that the sex increases and there's definitely incest. I am trying, and hopefully succeeding, to find a good balance with a fun story with a decent amount of sex.

When does mom get involved??

Awesome work, keep it up, add some creampie next time :p

I know this is just a fun story but I am enjoying it a lot. So keep it up. Hope to see more real soon. thank you.

I fantasize about big ducks but not horses. I seriously hate giantess with huge tire and asses. Just make it a story about him coming to terms with his and only his changes.

It gets boring to read Jimmy with his sixteen inch horse dock tuck his mother minivan sized ads as Sherlock on garbage can tits

This is so easy and enjoyable. I can’t wait for the next chapters. Thanks.

WTF ??

Please continue this one. It’s supposed to be incest so he’s gotta bang his momma.

Very yummy indeed. I'm looking forward to more of this story. Thank you!

Great stuff, thanks for sharing it!

wrong category, but that might be because there is more to come?

silly oversize thing

I'm liking the story along, just don't turn him into a 'rapists. I want to see his conquests healthy and happy. 5*s

A good story, I like it a lot. AAAA+++

Fun story...a little too over-the-top with the size & growth, but it IS fantasy...gonna keep reading, tho'...

**5** stars...

Cute story! 5 BIG ONES.

Hell yeah! Cool story bro . 5 🌟 so far! 👍