All Comments on 'Guarded: Neon Sunset Ep. 01'

I realize after submitting that spacing between scene changes didn't carry over so there is no gap between paragraphs. This is entirely my fault for not checking the preview thoroughly after pasting the content in. I apologize if this makes things a little more difficult to read, I can't edit without pulling the whole story down, so I will be more mindful of that going forward in future episodes.

Loving it so far! You definitely have me waiting on more, will definitely be checking back in!