All Comments on 'Guess Who Called'

I can't wait to read your other ones. Ignore the haters. They make the same comments on all stories in this genre. I guess they're too mentally ill to just not read them.

Not too long with lots of unnecessary detail and not too short. Very efficient story telling.

very hot story, very realistic.

This was a hot, sexy story.

Since it was obvious were it was leading right from the beginning the first third and all the talk, as interesting as it partly was, could have been straightend out a bit. Also I like the curiosity every(?) man has about his wife's previous lovers. Making a threesome fantasy come real seems to be easiest and least jealousy provoking with a guy she used to have sex with, anyways. So they were going the safe route here. Also the wife came over as very nice because she certainly wouldn't have done anything if her husband hadn't pushed so much.

playing softly in the background. It was obvious where the story was headed and therefore it didn't disappoint. Hubby was a bit more insecure about the cockparison issue than he needed to be... for the moment, but having now shared?

You left a nice sized opening for a possible (but not necessary) sequel.

I enjoyed the story, though would have preferred it without the hot tub part. Good characterization and the sex was hot, but the husband was a little too focused on the former lover's cock. Seemed odd. And I thought the wife gave in a little too easily after all her previous protests. Still, I enjoyed the story.

...some Lit Feedback I just got in my email from "Anonymous":

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which I suspect came from the misogynistic commenter above who courageously names himself "Anonymous". Devastating wit. I'm crushed.

One of the best I've read here. Keep up the good work.

One of the best I've read here. Keep up the good work.

Maybe it summed up the great relationship this man and woman were having, or the way they were sharing their world together.

A lot of mutual respect and honesty. It's also fine writing, and I was enjoying it right up until you came up with my unsafe word - the dreaded hottub.( Do you see how I do that, make it one word?)

I couldn't continue, my aversion to hot tubs in hotwife tales knows no bounds. You were racing away with a 5 and as it's my dilemna, not your fault, I've docked you to 4*.

Ignore them. They feed on attention.

Many thanks author...

M.

The writing is technically excellent. Reading it is a pleasure. The story, though, for some of us, is another matter. I'd like to see a sequel in which the consequences of that evening -- no matter what they may be -- are kicked around between Jim and his "loving" wife.

If we are generous, we see this as a love story. Others may see it as a working out of a perversion, especially Jim's. Perhaps it is a combination? Relationships are often complex. Mr. Romancer (what a fitting name!) explores them for us.

I'd say he was playing a dangerious game allowing an old lover back in her life. Too many things could go wrong ,and twenty years of marriage could be destroyed.

It is an alright story, but to think of it as real, doesn't quite do it for me, but it could be a good fantasy.

This was a well written and erotic story. I like the work you put into the story that establishes enough of the background and character development to let the reader live vicariously inside this tale.

Clear 'old boyfriend MFM' from the title plus the first paragraph. Writing mechanics off a little in this offering...I spotted two typos! Not bad for free. Excellent interplay among the characters, all three duos AND the trio together carried the action very well!

Agree the hot tub is a bit cliche in an 'old lover visits' tale, but it IS the most dependable device to get everyone naked (unless you count 'strip poker' - weird in this context)! Also agree Hubby was too obsessed with trying to 'out' Sweetie's false claim of Bull-pecker shortness and thus focused on the 'strange kickstand' too much.

4.6 = 5*

vary hot story, I like a hot threeway.,, and this one was vary motivating... great story

lea

I think you meant "notes".

I enjoyed your letter very much, as one that has experienced this type of get together with a spouse and another male I can say that this story had me very aroused.

The hot tub was a great ice breaker and the see- through bikini was a nice touch.

Just getting to read "romancer" stories. His bio says he's not into pain or anger, so I guess we won't be getting all that recrimination and marriage falling apart stuff that so many on this site seem to demand. Thanks for nailing the "loving wives" category as it's described. Hope more will be forthcoming !

What a great story. Love sharing with sloppy seconds and cum flavoured kisses.

Nice story, My wife and I enjoy reading stories that have a mature wife being shared. Makes us both horny.

This was very good