by lmnop321
Several mistakes, but not bad.
Hot! Hot! Hot! Great buildup to bombastic payoff ! A 5+!
I loved, loved, loved this story. Incredibly hot and exciting. If this is a true story, you've lived out every man's fantasy! WOW!
well written, one of the best tease stories around, not too long as well, great!!
why the change of characters as interest was building?