All Comments on 'Guilt Free Symbiosis Ch. 01'

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Motherlessone77Motherlessone77over 2 years ago

wow, I normally don't hate 2 stories a night. Another woman who should have the common decency to divorce before replacing her husband. This is getting old and tired. This is wrong. The guy maybe old and tired? But doesn't deserve to be betrayed. Come on. I know what your gonna say. This is just fiction. Maybe? But I am betting this happens more and more with the acceptance of incest, secretly in some places.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Motherlessone77 you are right it's same with all these stories same ending every time

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcover 2 years ago

Pretty good but with no prelude of how they got there and the "rules" it's a little lacking in content. Clearly more coming, so hopefully you fill in the gaps beyond the sex. 4*

sp9983sp9983over 2 years ago

Really didn't like it. Poor writing, it's like ttrying to watch a movie starting in the middle.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Incredibly hot story. Please keep writing as this young alpha takes over his household and takes his place as his mommy’s “daddy”. Agree it would be nice to go back and give some backstory but that can happen later as a flashback.

LekoeLekoeover 2 years ago

Great story. It is literally and figuratively well built towards a climax.

I'm curious about the rules and longing for a sequel.

Keep on writing.

NevadidNevadidover 2 years ago

Navy hair? You know that Navy is a shade of blue, right?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

More! and keep the daddy talk goin please that's a taboo I never knew I needed lol

dirtysondirtyson6 months ago

Yeah more naughty talk and don't forget about her fertile womb!

Sonnyw55Sonnyw555 months ago

This story needs a another chapter,

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Well done, so hot. I can see much more to cum. The only thing I would say is wish there would have been a little more set up upfront to know why they got to this point in there relationship. Looking forward to the next chapter

ToopizzaToopizza5 months ago

Very erotic but needs a continuation

rjb426874rjb4268744 months ago

WHY DIDN'T YOU FINISH THIS STORY??????

YOU LEFT IT HANGING AND WE WANT TO KNOW IF HE GOT BETWEEN HIS MOTHERS LEG AND FILLED HE WITH HIS CUM.

KEEP GOING WITH THIS STORY.

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