All Comments on 'Guilty as Charged'

Seeing how this is your first story, please, DO continue. You're writing is impeccable, highly erotic, extremely arousing and very descriptive. Well done!

Great story for your first.

This was fantastic, absolutely loved it. Great debut. Keep writing.

Why do I feel that your "Close Friend" is actually your sister? I guess, it would be perfect if that were the case. I'm hoping that it is, whether we learn the truth or not. It's what I now imagine! LOL! AHHHHhhhh....GREAT 1st effort..1st Story. Loved it!

...for the positive comments. I will admit to being surprised.

And no, 'Anonymous', the story isn't autobiographical - sorry for popping your bubble.

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Could've just let it to the reader's imagination after they got caught.

Fathering someome else's wife's child, and Erin itself becoming a slut just ruined it.

Really enjoyed the story. Thank you so much for the hard work and sharing it with the community. Really, awesome job!

Waaaaaaaaaawh great development of the story being a start you're great

the epiloge put it from 5* to mere 3*

completely uneccessary (for me at least)

But no matter my opinion about the ending the story is very well written!

Keep up your good work!