All Comments on 'Guilty x Creatures Ch. 08'

Good stuff.

G.This is a very well written, awesome story! The characters are consistant, Kianna is loveable, and seeing the contrast between the two sisters is lots of fun. As of now, we haven't seen much character out of Fiona other than rebellion, but based on her reactions to seeing her sister punished and her being taken to the restroom, I would guess that she'd turn out to be a sassy and kinky dark elf once she finally settles down and accepts her position. It will be interesting to see how the story develops, what with the call from Salia coming in a week and the looming threat (however idle the threat may be) of the sisters' mother getting involved, and I hope we get some answers regarding their father in the next chapter. Perhaps it may explain their cluelessness regarding magic and their seeming odd behavior for dark elves. Might also explain why their mother abandoned them. Anyways, keep up the great work! This story is way underated in my opinion. 5 stars for this and all the chapters.

This is a very well written, awesome story! The characters are consistant, Kianna is loveable, and seeing the contrast between the two sisters is lots of fun. As of now, we haven't seen much character out of Fiona other than rebellion, but based on her reactions to seeing her sister punished and her being taken to the restroom, I would guess that she'd turn out to be a sassy and kinky dark elf once she finally settles down and accepts her position. It will be interesting to see how the story develops, what with the call from Salia coming in a week and the looming threat (however idle the threat may be) of the sisters' mother getting involved, and I hope we get some answers regarding their father in the next chapter. Perhaps it may explain their cluelessness regarding magic and their seeming odd behavior for dark elves. Might also explain why their mother abandoned them. Anyways, keep up the great work! This story is way underated in my opinion. 5 stars for this and all the chapters.

Oh! Wow! Thank you so much! It's so awesome to hear that you'er enjoying the story and that you like the characters! You don't know how great it is to hear that! Seriously, thank you!

As for your assessment on Fiona? You're pretty spot on, lol! But don't think you've got her fully figured out just yet, there's a lot more to her than what we've seen so far, lol!

And as far as the rest of the story goes? Well, I'm afraid I can't give out too much in the way of details here since I don't want to spoil anything, but yes, everything will eventually be explained, so please stay tuned! There's a lot more to come, lol!