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Click here"Hey!" cried Fiona as Kianna grabbed her by the back of her head and began to force her down in an effort to shove her face into the bowl of porridge "Stop! No, no! Don-!"
"Master!" smiled Kianna as she held Fiona's struggling and sputtering face down in the bowl "Can I have the other bowl!? Please!?"
"Sure" said Anton as he nonchalantly set his mug down and made to get up from his seat.
Molly gave an annoyed grunt and jumped down from his lap as he began to rise. She followed behind him as he went to the counter and back.
"Thank you!" cried Kianna as he set the bowl down in front of her.
"You're welcome" said Anton as he retook his seat and caught Molly as she made to jump back up in his lap.
Fiona lifted her head straight up into the air and took a panicked breath as Kianna let her go.
"Y-you! What the Hell is wrong with you!" she gasped as she tried to catch her breath "You psycho! You almost killed me you crazy bitch!"
"Please! I didn't even come close!" muttered Kianna as she took a bite from the new bowl.
Fuming, Fiona glared at her sister for a moment before looking back down at the bowl in front of her.
"...You're really not going to help me eat this!?" she asked as glanced sideways at her sister.
"No" said Kianna as a coy smile spread across her face "I'm not!"
Fiona's eyes immediately darted over to Anton. He gave her his own condescending smile as he rested his cheek against his closed fist and settled in to watch the coming show.
"...Seriously!?" she grumbled as she closed her eyes in frustration and lowered her face towards the bowl of porridge "...Argh, I hate you both!"
"Yes, we know!" said Anton as he and Kianna gave each other a smile and commenced to enjoy their own helpings of breakfast.
Oh! Wow! Thank you so much! It's so awesome to hear that you'er enjoying the story and that you like the characters! You don't know how great it is to hear that! Seriously, thank you!
As for your assessment on Fiona? You're pretty spot on, lol! But don't think you've got her fully figured out just yet, there's a lot more to her than what we've seen so far, lol!
And as far as the rest of the story goes? Well, I'm afraid I can't give out too much in the way of details here since I don't want to spoil anything, but yes, everything will eventually be explained, so please stay tuned! There's a lot more to come, lol!
This is a very well written, awesome story! The characters are consistant, Kianna is loveable, and seeing the contrast between the two sisters is lots of fun. As of now, we haven't seen much character out of Fiona other than rebellion, but based on her reactions to seeing her sister punished and her being taken to the restroom, I would guess that she'd turn out to be a sassy and kinky dark elf once she finally settles down and accepts her position. It will be interesting to see how the story develops, what with the call from Salia coming in a week and the looming threat (however idle the threat may be) of the sisters' mother getting involved, and I hope we get some answers regarding their father in the next chapter. Perhaps it may explain their cluelessness regarding magic and their seeming odd behavior for dark elves. Might also explain why their mother abandoned them. Anyways, keep up the great work! This story is way underated in my opinion. 5 stars for this and all the chapters.
G.This is a very well written, awesome story! The characters are consistant, Kianna is loveable, and seeing the contrast between the two sisters is lots of fun. As of now, we haven't seen much character out of Fiona other than rebellion, but based on her reactions to seeing her sister punished and her being taken to the restroom, I would guess that she'd turn out to be a sassy and kinky dark elf once she finally settles down and accepts her position. It will be interesting to see how the story develops, what with the call from Salia coming in a week and the looming threat (however idle the threat may be) of the sisters' mother getting involved, and I hope we get some answers regarding their father in the next chapter. Perhaps it may explain their cluelessness regarding magic and their seeming odd behavior for dark elves. Might also explain why their mother abandoned them. Anyways, keep up the great work! This story is way underated in my opinion. 5 stars for this and all the chapters.