All Comments on 'Guitar Freakout'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
complete

This story is complete and concise as is. It needs no more exposition and I believe it was intentionally structured in this manner. Enjoyable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Needs work.

Needs more. Ended too quickly. Needs a back story to build up to the bigger moments.

Bridget69Bridget69over 16 years ago
This guitar...

strikes all the right chords.

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